I don't really want to specialize in headshots but I would love to develop a strong base so that they can be something I can confidently offer. I only have one light and a small room to shoot in at the moment. Her hair was quite difficult and still bothers me. Besides that, I'd love some comments. Thanks!
Hi there,
Given the technical constraints and that you don't want to specialize, I only can only recommend to work on the the emotions they are showing.
One is extremely happy (is that what want)?
The other expression might be a little bit disturbing - as per the size of the subject's eyes and also because they are red.
The button stretching the clothes in the second image bothers me a little too.
Good luck.