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Don Miner's picture

Eyes Wide Shut

Hello Everyone,

I am looking for some critique, gut punches or "likes", feedback is what I want. This shot is just my start with F stoppers and I know there are flaws, especially in post. So if you'd please fire away so that I may grow. Thankyouverymuch!

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Hey Don,

Firstly, nice composition. Great time of day. Great location. Great subject matter.

Some critique I'd give you (take it or leave it) would be to either focus your composition either more or less on the birds. They seem a little distracting, as though they were in your shot, but not necessarily intentionally. I also notice that the far right bird has no head, haha. I'd recommend splitting this shot into two separate shots; one tightly cropped on the horizon and cloud-porn, and a second focused on the beach birds enjoying that sunset.

Maybe dodge out your saturation a touch, maybe down to 75% opacity of what you have here.

Great start overall! Not much to critique here.