The horizon seems off to me but maybe it's the angle of the hill?
I think theres too much dead area in the photo, specifically foreground and sky. A quick recrop would do really well on top of adjusting the horizon. I did a little crop without rotating it to give you an example of what I'm talking about for my personal taste. It's still a bit softer than I'd want and more haze than I'd prefer as well. To me this gives a little more direction to the photo rather than a wide shot on the road. Just an idea!
I agree with Alex re: mid ground doing little for the shot. I think it also need a crop top and bottom to bring the viewer into the image more. For what its worth I did a quick hack job illustrating what I'm talking about.
I kind of agree with you. Not sure, if I agree with a lot of dead areas, but I can definitely crop the image to bring the viewer more into the image.
I gave a lot of thought about the horizon during post, but it's a little subtle. There was no specific horizon, and it was just the hills.
I like the 4:3 crop factor for my landscape shots, rather than a square or a wide panoramic style.
Below is the cropped image, that I thought would look better than the original one.
The horizon seems off to me but maybe it's the angle of the hill?
I think theres too much dead area in the photo, specifically foreground and sky. A quick recrop would do really well on top of adjusting the horizon. I did a little crop without rotating it to give you an example of what I'm talking about for my personal taste. It's still a bit softer than I'd want and more haze than I'd prefer as well. To me this gives a little more direction to the photo rather than a wide shot on the road. Just an idea!
I agree with Alex re: mid ground doing little for the shot. I think it also need a crop top and bottom to bring the viewer into the image more. For what its worth I did a quick hack job illustrating what I'm talking about.
Many Thanks for the feedback, Alex, and David!
I kind of agree with you. Not sure, if I agree with a lot of dead areas, but I can definitely crop the image to bring the viewer more into the image.
I gave a lot of thought about the horizon during post, but it's a little subtle. There was no specific horizon, and it was just the hills.
I like the 4:3 crop factor for my landscape shots, rather than a square or a wide panoramic style.
Below is the cropped image, that I thought would look better than the original one.