Hi. Need some constructive criticism on this one. I personally like but I don’t feel it’s up to par.
I’m fairly new to photography and could use some guidance. Plan to take photography classes come the spring but til then, it’s the University of YouTube
A couple of old photos taken while the Amtrak was stopped - somewhere in Colorado, I think?
(And yes, I like that the vertical leans!)
Just a heads up for anyone that may be interested (and as things are slow in the group.....).
This female has arrived at Hamerton. This place rescues animals from all over the world, mainly endangered species, and they breed when they can.
I've photographed Ady a few times now. We get better each time as a team. This image was a fave from our latest session. I hope you like it to.
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Hi Darrel, It looks like there was some nice light! However, it does not seem sharp due to perhaps a too slow of a shutter. If you could have gotten a bit higher, the head of the kayaker would not be one with the mountains in the background which would made him stand out a bit more. With a bit more exposure, the layers of the mountains in the background might also make for a more interesting image. In more cases than not, it doesn't work to center your subject as is the case here (the kayaker). Perhaps moving the kayaker a bit to the left in your composition would have worked better. I suggest brushing up on composition guidelines and perhaps the exposure triangle. Hope that helps!
All that Daniel recommends, just as visual example...
and this little bright part of the sky only draws attention.