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Sunrise. Puducherry. India
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Hi Vijay,

Great rule of thirds demonstration! I love the contrast between the strong, sharp rocks and the water behind them. I also like the balance between the sun to the right and the wood in the water to the left.

On the other hand, I assume the actual colors were a bit warmer (more of the orange, for example), so if this is true I'd try to get more of them in post. Also the sun is a bit too blown, if you can restore some of the highlights it might do good to the end result.

Oren
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I agree with both those points. Too heavy on the neutral tones so I'm not getting any sense of warmth or coolness. Also there are some awesome rays of light popping in the sky. I'd definitely try and bring some highlights back to emphasize those just slightly.

@ Jeff Walsh,
comments appreciated.
at present I work in LR. tried enhancing the sun rays but after all efforts did not manage that well.
Noted for mid tone colors and working more on highlights.
Thanks.

@ Oren sarid,
Comments Appreciated. Noted about enhancing colours and work on sun's blown highlights.
Thanks.