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Edgars Slišāns's picture

Lakeshore in mire

Photo taken during day hike in mire, did some minor retouching and cropped the picture a bit. Would like to hear your thoughts how to improve it.

Regards,
Edgars

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Very nice composition and location. Is the horizon straight? I think it's a little bit off.. that's what (for me) is annoying to see.
You said you cropped it. I would like to see a bit more of the bottom right.

It feels like the horizon line is higher on the right. I might've pushed the tops of the trees on the left to the top of the frame, or just outside of it to fill that side more in order to balance the openness of the left. But this is a super dope shot. Love the tones and mood, really good stuff.

Freek, Jeff,

Thanks a bunch for your input. I'l be honest, I am prety terrible with leveling my shots when I don't have clear reference line like horizon.

Here is slightly modified version. I cropped it a bit less and tried to tilt it although I am not sure if it is better.