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Fireworks celebration (That Luang Stupa)

Greeting Shot for my first post in this Group, this photo was taken at That Luang Stupa (Vientiane Capital, Laos) on the Army Celebration Day.

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Very striking, attractive images, Phetmanolack! I like the all-gold colours in the second, and the third is very spectacular. I look forward to seeing more from you.

Great attempts, PP..........If I may, I'd like to make a couple of comments. On #'s 2 & 4........crop or clone out the light of the left and the light on the right on #'s 2 & 3, as they draw attention away from your subject. Also, on #4 clone out or change the red lower left of the building..............

Great work PP, the exposures are spot on.

I not sure I totally agree with Terry on the removal of the light at the edge of the frame. I think they add a bit of balance - this may have been further improved if taken a bit wider so they aren't so close to the edge. You could certainly try to remove, and see which you prefer

Being picky, I would have liked to see a bit more of the base in 2-4 to anchor the image.

Overall you have presented some wonderful images.