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Hidden Waterfall in Bali Indonesia

Captured this panorama by wandering down an unmarked path in Bali, Indonesia. Would love to hear what you think!

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It's a beautiful lush wall the falls punctuate, Daniel. Nice job! The one thing I'd change, for my tastes, is to put the waterfall off-centre, to the right, so the slight lateral movement of the water is into the frame. The asymmetry would make the image more dynamic. Others will disagree!

Appreciate it Chris! I went back and forth on this; I was connected to the right side (perhaps a bit too much) due to all the interesting details, but I see your point. Thanks!

I agree with you about that detail on the right, Daniel! I don't know what I'd have actually done in your place; it depends on what is out of shot i.e. whether it's usable in a wider view without compromising the "green wall" effect.

Hi Daniel,
I am much in agreement with Chris on this one, and I can appreciate your desire to keep the interest on the right as it provides a bit of balance.
I would be tempted to typically crop from the right but with that balance I think removing the left works also.

Otherwise a wonderful image. If I had top be real picky I would have liked a little more detail in the fall, showing the classic silky strands of water but that is a personal (and again picky) preference.

Great work overall.

Appreciate the comments Alan!