Dramatic! I like your shot as is, but if I was to comment on the scene, I might like to see some more light on the far ends of the mountain range. It seems like the left end of the range might be better served with a bit of lightening along the water. But, Yogesh, I really like the way you've done this shot.
thank you so much darin .. i will certainly try to do as you have suggested .. i took a long time to decide between leaving it in color or converting it to a b&w .. and b&w was not easy .. i really appreciate what you have noticed .. Regards
I would agree with Darin, a little more light in the ends of the mountains and perhaps even brighten up the peaks a bit might add even more to the shot.
thank you so much Peter .. a creative criticism indeed .. I will try to spend some more time with this .. I really appreciate your honest feedback .. cheers ..
Very dramatic image, Yogesh! You've certainly made the most ot the sweep of water, the streaky sky, and the crisp form of the mountain. Reading the others' comments, I can see that brightening the left edge to "balance" seems like the thing to do, but I rather think instead that you've stuck to a vision very well, and that doing what the others suggest would dilute that vision.
I don't know the topography there, but the image looks rotated clockwise slightly - maybe 0.3 - 0.4 degrees - to me. It may actually be correct, but just looks a bit off.
thank you Chris .. It is so nice to read these feedbacks .. I did align the horizon but now since you've pointed it out maybe i'll fix that too .. I understand the 'dilute that vision' thing .. But again it is so nice to hear what others have to say about your work .. It'll certainly help me with my future works .. Thank you again for appreciating my efforts and have a good day .. cheers
The more I look at this image, the less likely that I would be inclined to change anything... My first reaction was to bring up the shadows on the mountain edges and try to make thing stands out more... but after dwelling on that, I think it would actually wash out the image... So much for my first impressions!
Dramatic! I like your shot as is, but if I was to comment on the scene, I might like to see some more light on the far ends of the mountain range. It seems like the left end of the range might be better served with a bit of lightening along the water. But, Yogesh, I really like the way you've done this shot.
thank you so much darin .. i will certainly try to do as you have suggested .. i took a long time to decide between leaving it in color or converting it to a b&w .. and b&w was not easy .. i really appreciate what you have noticed .. Regards
Yogesh,
I would leave it in B&W. I haven't seen the color version, but the B&W is gorgeous.
Wow! Really nice capture.
I would agree with Darin, a little more light in the ends of the mountains and perhaps even brighten up the peaks a bit might add even more to the shot.
thank you so much Peter .. a creative criticism indeed .. I will try to spend some more time with this .. I really appreciate your honest feedback .. cheers ..
Very dramatic image, Yogesh! You've certainly made the most ot the sweep of water, the streaky sky, and the crisp form of the mountain. Reading the others' comments, I can see that brightening the left edge to "balance" seems like the thing to do, but I rather think instead that you've stuck to a vision very well, and that doing what the others suggest would dilute that vision.
I don't know the topography there, but the image looks rotated clockwise slightly - maybe 0.3 - 0.4 degrees - to me. It may actually be correct, but just looks a bit off.
Well done - very strong image!
thank you Chris .. It is so nice to read these feedbacks .. I did align the horizon but now since you've pointed it out maybe i'll fix that too .. I understand the 'dilute that vision' thing .. But again it is so nice to hear what others have to say about your work .. It'll certainly help me with my future works .. Thank you again for appreciating my efforts and have a good day .. cheers
The more I look at this image, the less likely that I would be inclined to change anything... My first reaction was to bring up the shadows on the mountain edges and try to make thing stands out more... but after dwelling on that, I think it would actually wash out the image... So much for my first impressions!