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Ian Luyten's picture

The sun plunging into the sea

.. through the clouds

the goal was to make the sun appear very large..

Feedback is appreciated

Edit: new edit added, discovered that in Dark Table, you need to turn off 'filmic rgb' for sunsets and the like ...
Edit2: oops, it was actually another shot of the series .. point stands

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I like it. I'm assuming it's a composite of some sort?

I'm only saying this because you asked for feedback. I would lighten up the foreground just a touch. The sun looks like it has rings like Saturn. I think you could blend in the glow around the sides a little better. Assuming this is a composite I would put the sun closer to the horizon. Maybe behind or partly behind a windmill.

These are just some small adjustments I would make but I overall I like it.

Thank you for your feedback!

This is not a composite but taken with an 800mm, so the effect is purely optical (not even a crop). The sun really looked like that, rings and all :) .

I would have liked the sun a bit lower too, but then it got too cloudy so that didn´t happen :(

I will try a version with the foreground a touch lighter.

thanks again!

You know you can move the sun using photoshop? IDK if that's something you'd want to do but that's what I meant. I have a few photos with the sun like this from my 600mm and it can be fun to take that sun and put it in different photos. I realize this isn't something everyone would want to do though.

hmm I'm assuming that's one of the new AI features of photoshop? Since I use Linux I don't have the luxury of PS .. I use GIMP.

Since the effect can be created entirely in camera, I prefer to do it that way anyway .. the process of making the picture was fun, I´d love to do it again when I have the chance!

edit: hoping the sun won´t be covered in clouds like it was this time ..

No it has nothing to do with AI. You literally just take a lasso tool, select the sun, and move it. Just something you can do when mother nature doesn't cooperate.