0 0 Paul Watt November 8, 2015 Dawn shoot today *edit* this is the second revision of this image. Hi all, Please could I have some CC on this image? Thanks :) Log in or register to post comments 5 Comments Luc van Gent November 8, 2015 [Edited] I like the sky and the lighting on the water. Composition wise to me it is not strong, feels cut off and leaning to the left as if it is not alight. 1 0 Paul Watt November 9, 2015 Luc van Gent Thanks. Yeah, I think you're right - it does seem a little cramped. 0 0 Anonymous November 8, 2015 Nice shot! However I do think that there is too much on the left side of the frame. The composition is not quite balanced. 1 0 Paul Watt November 9, 2015 Anonymous I agree. I was using a prime for the first time (a 40mm on a crop sensor) and looking at this, I just wish I'd taken a few more steps backwards! 0 0 Anonymous November 9, 2015 Paul Watt Congrats! I always want a new prime lens. I only have a Canon 50mm 1.8 now, really looking forward to get some more primes, like 35mm or a super wide angle. 0 0
I like the sky and the lighting on the water. Composition wise to me it is not strong, feels cut off and leaning to the left as if it is not alight.
Thanks. Yeah, I think you're right - it does seem a little cramped.
Nice shot! However I do think that there is too much on the left side of the frame. The composition is not quite balanced.
I agree. I was using a prime for the first time (a 40mm on a crop sensor) and looking at this, I just wish I'd taken a few more steps backwards!
Congrats! I always want a new prime lens. I only have a Canon 50mm 1.8 now, really looking forward to get some more primes, like 35mm or a super wide angle.