Nice! I think the colour balance could be a bit more interesting though. Perhaps warmer or colder, but I think warmer personally. My first thought when looking at this image and some of the others in your portfolio is that they seem a bit soft, like you have reduced the clarity setting on the raw file (or perhaps it is your retouching style/technique?) but I think for this style image it works in it's favour.
Nice! I think the colour balance could be a bit more interesting though. Perhaps warmer or colder, but I think warmer personally. My first thought when looking at this image and some of the others in your portfolio is that they seem a bit soft, like you have reduced the clarity setting on the raw file (or perhaps it is your retouching style/technique?) but I think for this style image it works in it's favour.
And maybe a bit more feathered light would be nice so that her face is the brightest part of the image, slowly falling off as you go down her dress :)
right hand is not good for me
looks like it's not her hand
and maybe i want a little bit more contrast