Agreed with Prefers Film. Remember your rule of thirds. Vertically, you're okay, but horizontally, her eyes are too far centered. Unless he was talking about cutting off the top of her head, in which case that's not always a gripe of mine, but some photographers cant stand it. But yes, fantastic lighting and lovely subject.
Love the lighting, hate the cropping.
Agreed with Prefers Film. Remember your rule of thirds. Vertically, you're okay, but horizontally, her eyes are too far centered. Unless he was talking about cutting off the top of her head, in which case that's not always a gripe of mine, but some photographers cant stand it. But yes, fantastic lighting and lovely subject.