Hi everyone , i'm an amateur and this pic is from my first session of portrait that i have taken during a portrait workshop in Milan ; i shoot with my Nikon d3200 with the 18-105 kit lens.
I'm open to all the critique that make me grow up.
Thanks
first time
Great first effort! For my taste, with her mood and pose, it looks a little bright on her face, but the light is shaping her collarbones, face and chest. If I were going to change anything, it'd be to have a little more light on the background to define her shape a little more around her back and hat so it doesn't bleed into the background. Keep going! Great start :)
thanks
You're welcome. It's a great outcome!