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Rani George's picture

Looking for Mondrian

I was looking for a cool reflection on the sunglasses, and thought the roof provided a Mondrian-like design. My primary focus has been on the sunglasses. would love any feedback.

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I strong image concept both in composition and execution. The great tones and dynamics work very well to emphasize the eye of the image. The one thing that I feel fights your idea is the white band with some sort of lines/textures on the left side. Right next to the ear. The rest of the image is subtle gradients, stark lines, sensual curves, and deep blacks but that element breaks that feel, for me. Good work!