Tris White's picture

winter portrait

a portrait of my wife. Shoot through umbrella camera left. CC welcome
cheers,
Tris

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As is always the case, it's all about lighting, right? The coat just kind of turns too dark on the bottom right. Maybe cropping it closer to the face or adding a smaller light on the right to illuminate the back? Other than that, the bokeh is creamy smooth and subject is easy on the eyes. ;-)
Good shot.

Tris White's picture

oops - uploaded the wrong file. here is the correct one. Thanks for the feedback.
cheers,
Tris

Yes! See, that cropping helps. My attention is not drawn to the spot behind her, and I see you've made the image warmer. Now it's really good.

Joseph Anthony's picture

Interesting to go with warm colors though the sun is falling behind her. I guess she could be by a fire. Wonder how a cool blue might look

Tris White's picture

thanks for the feedback. I hadn't considered this, but I will give it a try.
cheers,
Tris