Hi Justin. I like the tones in the image, but I think her face, especially her eyes, could use more light. Right now her forehead and left thigh seem to be competing as the two brightest spots and I'm not sure where I'm supposed to look.
cheers,
Tris
What Tris said. I thought the same thing, my eyes went straight to her thighs, not her face which generally in a portrait we want to direct viewers to the face. Even the lines of the couch lead to her thighs.
Hi Justin. I like the tones in the image, but I think her face, especially her eyes, could use more light. Right now her forehead and left thigh seem to be competing as the two brightest spots and I'm not sure where I'm supposed to look.
cheers,
Tris
thank you for the comment!
What Tris said. I thought the same thing, my eyes went straight to her thighs, not her face which generally in a portrait we want to direct viewers to the face. Even the lines of the couch lead to her thighs.
Nice work! The lighting could express over your model's body more