Really like the top one. The framing is cool in the second one, but for a portrait, at a distance (more of an environmental portrait I guess) it seems the model should be facing forward if you know what I mean. A turned face in a close up still works, but at a distance, not so sure. I hope I explained that thought well. Good job.
There is nothing wrong with these per se, Instagram is littered with this filtered style and they wold be considered perfectly pleasant by many. For me, the top one is too close to shoot from with a 50mm lens. Compositionally, maybe having your subject a little more off centre may have created more interest when using a 50mm lens.
Lovely, congrats. Maybe the face a touch too greenish in the first one? And what about letting that head and elbows breathe a little more? A little more air. 2nd one could borrow some air to the first, for my taste it has too many, specially when her is looking downwards. Still lovely, have a nice day.
Really like the top one. The framing is cool in the second one, but for a portrait, at a distance (more of an environmental portrait I guess) it seems the model should be facing forward if you know what I mean. A turned face in a close up still works, but at a distance, not so sure. I hope I explained that thought well. Good job.
There is nothing wrong with these per se, Instagram is littered with this filtered style and they wold be considered perfectly pleasant by many. For me, the top one is too close to shoot from with a 50mm lens. Compositionally, maybe having your subject a little more off centre may have created more interest when using a 50mm lens.
Lovely, congrats. Maybe the face a touch too greenish in the first one? And what about letting that head and elbows breathe a little more? A little more air. 2nd one could borrow some air to the first, for my taste it has too many, specially when her is looking downwards. Still lovely, have a nice day.