Look great, good stuff! Overall really well done :)
My only comment would be the lighting difference (from the pose and light angle) is casting shadow over one eye and not the other. You could definitely even out the eye light level if you felt you wanted to in post! :)
Lighting to me is very good to excellent. However the subjects pose is too put it mildly atrocious. To be honest she looks as if she is shoplifting a watermelon. If your aim was to highlight her triple E's then the far arm should NOT cross over one of them ... Step back and look at the whole subject not just what is in your minds eye. JUst as you must scan the frame edges you must also look critically at the subject before pressing that shutter and patting yourself on the back. we all do it, welcome to the club! ;)
Look great, good stuff! Overall really well done :)
My only comment would be the lighting difference (from the pose and light angle) is casting shadow over one eye and not the other. You could definitely even out the eye light level if you felt you wanted to in post! :)
but where are her pores!!?!?!?!?!
Lighting to me is very good to excellent. However the subjects pose is too put it mildly atrocious. To be honest she looks as if she is shoplifting a watermelon. If your aim was to highlight her triple E's then the far arm should NOT cross over one of them ... Step back and look at the whole subject not just what is in your minds eye. JUst as you must scan the frame edges you must also look critically at the subject before pressing that shutter and patting yourself on the back. we all do it, welcome to the club! ;)
Lol
Perhaps if you explained what you were trying to do with this picture - especially the pose - then people could help you more?