Like the colors and the sloppiness of her clothes and hair. I find her finger a little distracting and the flatness of light on her face and right eye though they appear like they would be in shadow some because of her hair. Very nice.
There is potency in the image, composition is more or less ok, color of the shirt and background is nice. However there are some issues in general that I would probably try to fix. First of all her hair look like having 2 different colors - one at the top, and lighter at the bottom. To me this doesn't look very nice (but I guess she has those in real life). To add to this, a comb would be useful during shooting, her hair got not that nice shape right now are not pleasant to look at :/ Her expression is also not nice for me, she look like she's shy and not feel comfortable. Colors over her skin are looking crazy nose is yellow, chicks are orange and forehead is grayish green. unifying that would help a bit. That's the biggest things I see, hope it helps! Cheers and good luck! :)
Like the colors and the sloppiness of her clothes and hair. I find her finger a little distracting and the flatness of light on her face and right eye though they appear like they would be in shadow some because of her hair. Very nice.
There is potency in the image, composition is more or less ok, color of the shirt and background is nice. However there are some issues in general that I would probably try to fix. First of all her hair look like having 2 different colors - one at the top, and lighter at the bottom. To me this doesn't look very nice (but I guess she has those in real life). To add to this, a comb would be useful during shooting, her hair got not that nice shape right now are not pleasant to look at :/ Her expression is also not nice for me, she look like she's shy and not feel comfortable. Colors over her skin are looking crazy nose is yellow, chicks are orange and forehead is grayish green. unifying that would help a bit. That's the biggest things I see, hope it helps! Cheers and good luck! :)