I like both of them, particularly the second one. The only recommendation I might have would be to try to reduce the brightness of the background. If you used a faster shuttter speed and a slight amount of fill flash, you might be able to keep the same light on the model and less of the bright spots in the background.
I like both of them, particularly the second one. The only recommendation I might have would be to try to reduce the brightness of the background. If you used a faster shuttter speed and a slight amount of fill flash, you might be able to keep the same light on the model and less of the bright spots in the background.