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prashanth sundar's picture

Critique Pls !

Captured with canon 700D, canon 18-55mm ef II lens, simpex tri lite. lightroom is used for editing purposes.

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Excellent. But I'd consider lifting the very darkest areas selectively - I don't know what your post skills are like, would you to talk about this, or me to do a version? The jpg would do but a link to a raw could help if that's useful.

Actually - maybe you already have? But not enough to quite work in the smaller version.

Whatever - great composition!

Thank you. Link to the raw file of this photo
https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B0oohS-gnkwUaDJJMWp3VW5Ha2s

Just a brighter version of the image with sharpened eyes, then layer mask. The eyes probably show too much now, but a tweak of the opacity slider would control that.

Another option to David's suggestion would be to use a reflector to fill some of the shadows. I like the pose and the overall feel of the image.