Here is a portrait work with model Cherry. I would like to have comments and critiques
Nikon 85mm
My Instagram id - jamesgeorgephotographi
Cherry
Here is a portrait work with model Cherry. I would like to have comments and critiques
Nikon 85mm
My Instagram id - jamesgeorgephotographi
Nice work! Love it
thankyou
It's nice, if looking for critiques I might say: I find her eyes way too white, the hard transition in the shade behind her creates an odd line, and the words and big cursive letter to the left of her face is distracting. I like the colors and her pose, though her left hand almost appears to be floating. Nice.
thankyou
I agree with Joseph about the eyes. I would have her turn her head a little more to her left so her eyes aren't looking some much out of the side of the eye socket. Or perhaps have her look more to camera left. Her right eye doesn't look right the way she is posed.
Other than that it looks nice.
thanks for your feedback .. appreciate it :)
First, I do like this a lot. But you are looking for how to up your game, which I respect. I agree about the eyes, did you listen the whites? If so, maybe too much. I'm with Douglas about the angle of the face but for a different reason: she has a very strong and long jaw, I wonder if she would look better looking more into the camera, shortening the jaw?