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I've been trying real hard to up my game in fashion photography. What do you think of this one shot? Tech details are on my profile, under that picture. Thank you very much! :)

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I really like the lighting on the face. Two items to consider - her knee is toward the camera making it look very large. Perhaps a slightly different pose with her right knee along side the left leg might be better; the yellow of the jacket draws my eye away from her face. Perhaps cropping below her shoulder would make for a stronger image. I like the pose showing the long neck and like the way the dark background separates her.

Thank you very much Steve. Indeed, the knee is too close to the camera, you're right! But I think I would lose too much resolution by the suggested crop. Thank you very much for taking the time to give me your opinion!