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Muhammad Akram Octaviori's picture

Hi I'm Photographer from Indonesia

I just focusing on photography about a year, and i'm interesting to travel photography. and I hope a can get some constructive feed back from these photo. please give me some advice. Thank you :)

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I like this shot. Good contrast and it conveys the quiet of the day dying down at sunset. There's only a couple of things I (who am not an expert) would have done differently:
1) make it a square frame by cutting the dark curtains to the side a bit smaller (but no big deal).
2) either make it a perfectly symmetric composition (put the vertical line in the middle of the frame and position the chair so it's 'cut' perfectly in half by it), or make it less symmetric. The fact that it's "almost" symmetric is slightly frustrating.

Overall, good shot though! I like the mood.