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Street Workout video | Need feedback

Hi,

I tried to video my morning workout in a cinematic way. Although I wanted to have a storyline but could not achieve it. Would love to get your feedback on the flow of the video, the footage and the editing. And what can I do better for similar video

Camera: Canon 80D
Lenses: Sigma 30mm 1.4, Tokina 11-16 2.8

Software: iMovie

I wanted to showcase the below storyline:
Been trying a skill for a while but kept failing at it. So moved on and tried a new skill and finally got it (which is actually true as shown in this video)

Regards,
Lohit

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I am a bit confused, you want this to be this a showcase of your morning workout, but you show a clock with a time of almost 3 pm (daylight give it away). I would cut the city scenes and focus more on the workout scenes, both the good and failures. I do like the opening with the push-up bars, and the failures, it makes you appear more real. The workout on the bars is a good scene, though I was looking to find more of your workout versus how you get to your workout.