I like the models pose and expression. My eye gets drawn to the light spot on her chest, even though I want to see her face. Darkening that spot and maybe raising exposure on her face just a little bit might do the trick.

Martin Strauss April 18, 2016 - 4:12 pm

Richard Bremer

thx for the critic. but no

for a simple reason: brightening up the face has a really bad influence of the tonality (looks shitty)

Richard Bremer April 19, 2016 - 4:03 pm

Martin Strauss

You're welcome, keep up the good work!

Elijah Rodney April 28, 2016 - 12:29 am

I love the simplicity. Beautiful model btw.

Dave Kavanagh July 26, 2016 - 6:28 pm

Stunning shot and model.