I was about to put this as a 4 Star photo. There's one thing I would have done (I know it's an old photo now) but, it's the T-shirt. I'm not sure if you use Photoshop at all, I'm assuming so, but I would have removed all the white stuff on t-shirt. That's it. From what I can see, the lighting is perfect, the model has done a good job too.
I was about to put this as a 4 Star photo. There's one thing I would have done (I know it's an old photo now) but, it's the T-shirt. I'm not sure if you use Photoshop at all, I'm assuming so, but I would have removed all the white stuff on t-shirt. That's it. From what I can see, the lighting is perfect, the model has done a good job too.