city of clouds by pauly pholwises
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city of clouds

August 22, 2014

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I'm not vibeing the expression in her eyes or the position of here hands and arms. You've cut her fingers off, and you need to crop a lot of the empty sky off - go with a wide frame. Sorry to sound harsh. It's a great concept and has a ton of promise.