It's easy to sit and judge someone else's work, when we weren't there to take the photo, so please don't take this the wrong way. I'm only making suggestions based on what I would do if I could go back and shoot this myself. If you had been a few steps to your left, you could have framed her a little better between those two rising diagonal lines behind her. I also feel that she should be more to the right, as the way her legs are positioned, it looks like she is about to fall out of the frame. The exposure is great, but I would have gone with a wider aperture, if possible, so she stands out even more, as I don't like my backgrounds that sharp.
Really great highlights on her hat and shoulders - the perfect amount of sugar on a great image
Thank you!
It's easy to sit and judge someone else's work, when we weren't there to take the photo, so please don't take this the wrong way. I'm only making suggestions based on what I would do if I could go back and shoot this myself. If you had been a few steps to your left, you could have framed her a little better between those two rising diagonal lines behind her. I also feel that she should be more to the right, as the way her legs are positioned, it looks like she is about to fall out of the frame. The exposure is great, but I would have gone with a wider aperture, if possible, so she stands out even more, as I don't like my backgrounds that sharp.