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1.83 - "Needs Work" 

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This Photo is obviously heavily inspired by "The iPhone Fashion Shoot By Lee Morris".

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2 Comments

Tom Hughes's picture

I enjoy the use of lights as elements in the image, although I would suggest looking at the placement a little to maybe avoid touching the model since that hurts the senses of depth you could create

Lennart Böwering's picture

Thank you for your feedback. I actually tried to give a better feeling of depth by putting the lights behind the model, overlapping her (they were actually about 2m behind her) and using the DOF. But I agree that the slight touch with the right light looks rather odd and moving it in either way would have been better.