Contest Entry by John Crisp

John Crisp

August 18, 2018 - 11:56 am

Not a lot of experience in portraits but wanting to learn.

3 Comments

Melissa García Ontiveros August 18, 2018 - 12:10 pm

The light is too harsh on her face, it makes the model look weird. But keep going :)

Mark V August 18, 2018 - 4:24 pm

Don't make the eyes pop to much. Feels unnatural.

Tom Hughes August 19, 2018 - 12:14 pm

Mark V

This is the very first thing I noticed. Something is definitely up with this. Too bright?

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