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2.33 - "Needs Work" 

I'm aware this blurs the line a little between beauty and portrait

Lauren Saurette of B&M in Toronto

Hair/Makeup/Styling by Paul Langill

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michaeljin's picture

I think a couple of stray hairs could have been cleaned up (mostly the ones on the top right) and the little bit of background peaking out on the bottom right corner could have either been cropped out or filled.

Aside from that, I think it's nice.

David J. Fulde's picture

Thank you for the well-thought-out critique! I agree

Jesse Merz's picture

Agree with Michael, also the model's expression seems a little dead.