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2.22 - "Needs Work" 

Photo shot at the models home.
Model: Terra
MUA: Lesley de Haan

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3 Comments

I'll be honest, my biggest issue is cutting the light in half. I'm unsure if this can be fixed by changing crop depending on how you shot it, but I feel like lights need to either be fully in shot or fully out and the half-way thing looks odd. But maybe that's just me!

Thank you for your constructive comment, Tom! It's much appreciated! I understand what you mean and I haven't looked at it that way. So it's an eye-opener to me. Thank you again for taking time to write this comment!

Jesse Merz's picture

The photo feels fairly soft and flat, I think if you brought the (visible) rear light around to the side a bit it might add some interest. Also I'd like to see the model's eyes in this pose, otherwise she just looks bored and/or shy.