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2.22 - "Needs Work" 

Photo shot at the models home.
Model: Terra
MUA: Lesley de Haan

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3 Comments

Tom Hughes's picture

I'll be honest, my biggest issue is cutting the light in half. I'm unsure if this can be fixed by changing crop depending on how you shot it, but I feel like lights need to either be fully in shot or fully out and the half-way thing looks odd. But maybe that's just me!

Tjeerd Doosje's picture

Thank you for your constructive comment, Tom! It's much appreciated! I understand what you mean and I haven't looked at it that way. So it's an eye-opener to me. Thank you again for taking time to write this comment!

Jesse Merz's picture

The photo feels fairly soft and flat, I think if you brought the (visible) rear light around to the side a bit it might add some interest. Also I'd like to see the model's eyes in this pose, otherwise she just looks bored and/or shy.