Ugh really torn here! I feel like this is a really good image but there are a few things that (for me) are holding it back including some Chromatic Aberration on the background leaves and I feel like I want the foreground leaves out of focus also... But that is also kind of nit-picky and overall it's a good shot I feel!

This looks like on-camera flash again, very harsh shadows and it flattens out her skin to a dull uniform tone. Nice framing though. I agree with Tom, the leaves should either all be in focus or all oof.