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1.54 - "Needs Work" 

Another portrait of my daughter. Thanks in advance for the cc!

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michaeljin's picture

I think the angle of the lighting is a bit odd. Judging from the catch lights in the eyes, it seems like the key light is slightly below her eye line. Maybe try lifting it up a bit?

Martin L's picture

Thanks for the feedback Michael. This was one of my first shoots with lights... I realize now how unconventional this was and don’t do this anymore but I still love the emotion portrayed in this shot. So much to learn but loving every minute of it!