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With Elia Locardi
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2.43 - "Needs Work" 

Watching the Kalapana lava flow forming new earth and shaping the landscape in Hawaii.

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I think you could have done a longer exposure to see the smoke flowing. It's a very popular viewing spot in Hawai (I saw it on Thomas Heaton's channel), I'm sure they know it at Fstoppers, so you need to be perfect.

I actually like that you didn't do a long exposure. Smoothing out the smoke would have taken away from the violence of Mother Nature. I wish that you had cropped in closer.

I like this but the yellow in the top right is distracting my eye...maybe some selective desaturation in this coner