Since this is an "unedited" critique, here is a completely unedited, SOOC image from a shoot a while back. The only "processing" is RAW to JPG conversion. In the spirit of the critique, no "global adjustments" were applied to the image before converting to JPG.
Edited version is in my profile if you want to see the final version
NIKON D5 85mm · f/5.6 · 1/200s · ISO 50
-Savage Thunder Grey paper
-Background: Profoto D2 and Chrome Orange gel
-Main Light: Profoto D2 w/ Profoto 3' RFi Octabox overhead on Manfrotto 085BS