Male Fitness

You got the "ball" and faces. However, there are three things holding the image back. the first is the subject matter. Some things just aren't going to be interesting and this is an example. The other thing, would be to crop tighter. Crop to 4x5 and slide all the way to the right so that frisbee is centered and they form the left and right portions of your frame. The left side adds nothing to the image except to accentuate the soccer goal even more than it has to be. Finally, I feel like you're just a touch late on capturing the best moment of this shot. He has already dropped his arm after the release, so it's just a bit past that moment of peak action. Hope this helps.