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2.63 - "Solid" 

Personal Trainer at the rec-center Elijah poses for his last images before graduation. Florida Atlantic University's colors are blue and red this is why I chose these colors for the rim lighting.

Rim lights are Godox V860II - Main light is a AD600 with a parabolic umbrella - Canon 5Dsr 24-70

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Very good

4-Star, I wish I could tell you what to do to make it a 5-star image. I am at a loss on how to improve it. maybe a reflector under him to lighten the shadow under the head. Not sure that would be better...

I think this photo would be much better if you centered him by cutting off some of the deadspace on the right. Maybe desaturate the blues a little. Great photo nonetheless!