Taken in Downtown Dallas on an overcast day. I bounced my on-camera flash off a large, grey-ish granite wall on the right which is providing the soft light source. 85 1.8 to throw out the background
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I like the posing and nice expression. I feel the lighting is just a hair too hot on his face and the eye sockets have a touch too much shadow. IMHO the entire left 1/3 of the photo is not needed and distracting- crop along the left edge of the tree. I think you've almost got it.
Thanks for your feedback! Think you might be right about the crop
Could be square crop in line with cubes in frame. minus distractions at the left.
love it! looks a touch out of focus but otherwise pretty solid