Taken in a studio with my friend Haily. I did this shoot with her to prove to her that she would be an excellent model. Her range of expression was extremely dynamic. Shot on a Sony A7C w/ 85mm lens
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The colors need some poppin' in my opinion. Up the exposure a stop or so, maybe?
I think the colors are just right.
I think her cool glasses are what are in focus and also the nose and then you get lead off to the left. Maybe if her pretty eyes had a catch light or some sort of connection? Also her hand is just there cropped at the wrist.. I just feel if you opened the crop it could help.