Moody athletic test

Hello.. This is one of my faveoit pictures from a recent test I did. I wanted to try out new retouching techniques. Do you guys think I went to far I hanging her cheek bones and or eyes?

Model: John Geerts

Model: John Geerts
Photographer: Bram van Dal

Camera settings:
Shutterspeed: 1/250
Aperture: F / 1.8
Iso: 320
Lens: 85mm

Location: Popei in Eindhoven at Strijp-S.

If you know how to work with sunlight, you can also work with a studio lamp, but that also applies the other way around.

In...

Some of my dramatic ports

Let me know what you think. Shot with a7r + 55/1.8.

The first two were shot in an art gallery in front a huge dot matrix LED screen. The second two were lit with a couple IKEA lamps.

Model: Lisa Rejen

Model: Lisa Rejen
Photographer: Bram van Dal
https://www.instagram.com/bvdbv_photography/

Camera settings:
Shutterspeed: 1/180
Aperture: F / 2.5
Iso: 100
Lens: 85mm

Lightsettings:
With this photo I left a studio lamp with an octabox and to the right of the model a reflector to soften the...

Model: Frans de Vocht

Model: Frans de Vocht
Photographer: Bram van Dal
https://www.instagram.com/bvdbv_photography/

Camera settings:
Shutterspeed: 1/125
Aperture: F / 2.0
Iso: 100
Lens; 85mm

Lightsettings:
On the left I put down a studio lamp with an octabox, instead of turning the lamp on, I turned off the...

Model: Lisa Rejen

Model: Lisa Rejen
Photographer: Bram van Dal

Camera settings:
Shutterspeed: 1/180
Aperture: F / 2.5
Iso: 125
Lens: 85mm

Lightsettings:
Front left I have a beautydish with a diffuser, under the studio lamp I have a white reflector on that side the shadow softened and on the right side I have a...

Model: Lisa Rejen

Model: Lisa Rejen
Photographer: Bram van Dal

Camera settings:
Shutterspeed: 1/180
ApertureL F / 2.5
Iso: 100
Lens: 85mm

Light settings:

To the left I have a studio lamp with an octabox, right back a studio lamp with an umbrella with a reflective white inside and on the right of her a reflector...

Model: Carlo Brouwers

Model: Carlo Brouwers
Photographer: Bram van Dal

Camera settings:
Shutterspeed: 1/180
Aperture: F / 2.0
Iso: 640
Lens: 85mm

With this photo we are in a building where both the left and the right of the model light enters the building. In the background you can see a yellowish mood lighting of a shop...

Model: Bram van Dal

Model: Bram van Dal
Photographer: Bram van Dal

Camera settings:
Shutterspeed: 1/125
Aperture: F / 8.0
Iso: 100
Lens: 85mm

In the front left I have a studio lamp with an octabox and on the right I have a striplight.

In this photo, I especially went the more creative way, where I have seen myself...