Concept shoot I did with Choyce
Shot with my Canon 60d and 18-135mm kit lens at 69mm iso 160 1/250 f9 with a white reflector below. The model was right up against the white backdrop with me sitting about 6-8 feet away from the model with a large soft box behind me raised slightly above me tilted at a 45 degree angle
I think you have done a very good job. She looks lovely. Your lighting, perspective, photo technique and editing all seem well done athough perhaps the skin looks a fraction over edited, but that so depends on the imagined or actual end use. This could easily be in a beauty magazine and there it might be just perfect. The large but asymmetrical reflection in her glasses, of the reflector, is a bit less than ideal but a minor point for sure.
It is very good. Liking it.
Thanks Ian for your feedback its always very detailed. i was going for that kinda over edited look initially it was toned down but I actually went back because I felt it looked better this way. The reflection of the reflector bothered me as well but during the shoot I couldn't find a way for it not to show also searched the internet and most similar colored lenses I saw the same issue.