A very glamourous photograph of a very glamourous woman. Both vesions look very good but the top one has much more of a professional polish. I am not keen on the whites of eyes being too whitened and here they are, in my view. But not hugely. I think you have shot and edited a very good and exciting image and I congratulate you.
The little black boob tube, or whatever it is, needs to go. And the only other negative that I can find is to do with her lipstick. Many women, including my beautiful daughter, wear their lipstick beyond their lips, to make their lips look fuller, I suppose. For me it just looks cheap, done like that and for most women they don't need fattened lips, just nicely defined through colour choice and careful application. Shahaf has perfect lips, so certainly does not need lipstick on her face. It creates a dark rim line and this draws my eye from her eyes to the lipstick. Whereas done "better" I would be mesmerised by the beauty of her eyes and her lips would add to the whole effect, rather than forcing me to see something I don't like. But perhaps I am alone in these views. I see this approach used all the time.
wow! thank you Ian for this comment! i really appreciate it!
and for the make up - so shahaf is a make up artist so it is impossible to tell her to do minimalism make up :P
looks great! would crop it a tiny bit tighter because her shirt matches the black and its doing something weird on the bottom. I mean.. not really that big of a deal but would be nice in my opinion. Lovely work!
A very glamourous photograph of a very glamourous woman. Both vesions look very good but the top one has much more of a professional polish. I am not keen on the whites of eyes being too whitened and here they are, in my view. But not hugely. I think you have shot and edited a very good and exciting image and I congratulate you.
The little black boob tube, or whatever it is, needs to go. And the only other negative that I can find is to do with her lipstick. Many women, including my beautiful daughter, wear their lipstick beyond their lips, to make their lips look fuller, I suppose. For me it just looks cheap, done like that and for most women they don't need fattened lips, just nicely defined through colour choice and careful application. Shahaf has perfect lips, so certainly does not need lipstick on her face. It creates a dark rim line and this draws my eye from her eyes to the lipstick. Whereas done "better" I would be mesmerised by the beauty of her eyes and her lips would add to the whole effect, rather than forcing me to see something I don't like. But perhaps I am alone in these views. I see this approach used all the time.
wow! thank you Ian for this comment! i really appreciate it!
and for the make up - so shahaf is a make up artist so it is impossible to tell her to do minimalism make up :P
I suspect she would take my views, on the lipstick, like my daughter did. Total disregard. Well that is their call not mine, for sure.
looks great! would crop it a tiny bit tighter because her shirt matches the black and its doing something weird on the bottom. I mean.. not really that big of a deal but would be nice in my opinion. Lovely work!
thank you Melissa!! :)
and yeah i have also notice the shirt just after i upload it!