Hi All,
I am here again want real critics so I can see my mistake and improve my work.It been Couple of month since starting my practices of retouching at my free time.
Image credit by- Jennifer McIntyre
Retouched by -Balraj Singh
Sitting at anchor. The weather is starting to change, the sky is cloudy with big puffy clouds
As we were planning our shoot, Iria said she needed a swimwear look. I wanted lifestyle with my car. We compromised. I think it turned out great. Hope you like it.
I have made sure to keep the original, but I've done this photograph the way you can see here. I've also done it in monochrome.
I passed this place on my way to an appointment yesterday, and I just knew I wanted to photograph it on my way home. That's precisely what I did.
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Very nice. 4.5
Thanks Motti.
This looks great! What is your skin touch up process like, if you don't mind me asking?
Thanks, Jonathan, I really like you ask my workflow.I simply use of FS and Lots of Doge and burn.
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Thanks, Gallego. for giving you to time to review.
Photo by: Jennifer McIntyre ;)
Thanks, Alex Cooke. Let me know the right credit of photo ;-).Alex, if you can give a minute to review the work it means me lots.thanks again.
Just shy of 4/5.
Nice work retaining some of the texture. It is clear that you have an understanding of retouching.
You've obviously put a lot of attention on the skin retouching. It would be nice to see the same attention spent on the hair. With such a polished finish on the skin, the stray hairs become almost more distracting in the after image than the before.
The lips appear far too soft for how much sharpness and definition you've made on the outline of the mouth. The chin also appears to be over retouched when compared to the rest of the face.
You may find it useful to periodically zoom out to 15% to see the context of the skin retouching while you work away at your FS and DB process.
Keep up the great work!
Really Thanks, Jeremy, Given a brief overview.I will continue my work and keep the post for feedback.Thanks Again!
Nice
Kind of overworked for me. Her face looks flat in the edited version. You lost the natural shadow on the left eye so now it looks like her eye is farther apart from her nose. Her chin also needs those natural shadows or else it looks noticeably photoshopped like that. 3.89/5