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I captured these water lilies, and although I generally liked the scene, I disliked all the "dirt" in the water, and the water came out with a really ugly color.

This was processed on an un-calibrated monitor, hope it looks all right. Will get my calibration device next week.

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That's a vast improvement. Good job.

Btw, all processing done in Affinity Photo.(Raw conversion in Capture One)

I'm wondering why you didn't use the RAW converter from Capture One itself? Just curiosity.

I haven't seen your question until now, and it's been a while now. But I seem to remember I started doing the retouching in C1, but cleaning up the water was too much a hassle there. That was way easier in Affinity.

I think the cleaned up water looks way better. I like the greens in the original better, for me they are to neonish in the post processed version, but maybe that was something you were going for.

I agree that the lilies look too green in the processed version.

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I definitely like the direction the edit is going. I think you can still keep a pleasant monochromatic color scheme, while also toning the green down a hair on the lily pads. This might create less contrast, but I think it will create a bit more of a cohesive feel. Currently, they green pads makes me think of the Toxic Avenger, which I love... but maybe not for lily pads.

Thanks to all for your comments, particularly suggesting that the lily pads have an unnatural toxic looking color, I totally get that.

It's been a while, so I think that they got that color to create a good contrast to the water. Maybe I'll revisit that file later. Hope I didn't flatten it yet.

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