Beautiful model. I find in a lot of the images she is overwhelmed by the background: distracting. Not sure what lens/aperture combo you were using but I wish it was more blurred. Of course repositioning could solve the problem as well. In several of the photos that railing for me is a distracting, bisecting graphic element. Also she centered in every frame, which is a little boring.
I think the images could have been made more dramatic with some off-camera lighting. I like how you used the existing light as a rim but you could have dropped the background exposure some and brought her up with off camera flash. I think that would have helped fight off the background competing for the viewers attention.
Beautiful model. I find in a lot of the images she is overwhelmed by the background: distracting. Not sure what lens/aperture combo you were using but I wish it was more blurred. Of course repositioning could solve the problem as well. In several of the photos that railing for me is a distracting, bisecting graphic element. Also she centered in every frame, which is a little boring.
I think the images could have been made more dramatic with some off-camera lighting. I like how you used the existing light as a rim but you could have dropped the background exposure some and brought her up with off camera flash. I think that would have helped fight off the background competing for the viewers attention.
Thank you Paul
First two and last two shots. Love the color contrast, lighting conditions, good amount of bg blur and overall energy. Nice job. :)
Thank you!