Really, you want feedback? That hat is hiding that natural beauty your model has...honestly, it is good, although I think you could have a tint of the green light behind the model in photo # 1 that way it breaks up the black hair against the black background...damn, she's hot...let her know that
I think these are solid but I'll have to echo D Man and say I think I'd like to see a hair light on the 1st photo, too. I think I'd also like to see more highlights in her eyes. That they're dark doesn't really support her upbeat attitude in this particular frame. Of course, that's my opinion and i know there are different opinions on catchlights, but for this one I think they'd bring it up a notch.
Really, you want feedback? That hat is hiding that natural beauty your model has...honestly, it is good, although I think you could have a tint of the green light behind the model in photo # 1 that way it breaks up the black hair against the black background...damn, she's hot...let her know that
thanks for the feedback, and I'll let her know your comment jajajaja
I think these are solid but I'll have to echo D Man and say I think I'd like to see a hair light on the 1st photo, too. I think I'd also like to see more highlights in her eyes. That they're dark doesn't really support her upbeat attitude in this particular frame. Of course, that's my opinion and i know there are different opinions on catchlights, but for this one I think they'd bring it up a notch.
thanks I'll keep that in mind.
I like the first one and the emotion that shows through. After that the second one is too stiff.