The use of soft natural light is fine, the exposure and depth of field are good, although the highlights are a bit bright. The cottoneaster, if that is what it is, is distracting as are the bright orange circles of confussion. More sensitivity and careful consideration of the impact of all elements on the whole, are needed. Ideally some light from camera left, perhaps from slightly behing the subject, to catch the hair, so it is not just black without detail but has more of the loveley shine that the rest of her hair has.
The use of soft natural light is fine, the exposure and depth of field are good, although the highlights are a bit bright. The cottoneaster, if that is what it is, is distracting as are the bright orange circles of confussion. More sensitivity and careful consideration of the impact of all elements on the whole, are needed. Ideally some light from camera left, perhaps from slightly behing the subject, to catch the hair, so it is not just black without detail but has more of the loveley shine that the rest of her hair has.
A good start but uch to improve. Keep it up.